Mothers are like candles who burn themselves to shower their light of guidance, love and care.But, are we also loving her unconditionally?
WHY THE MOTHER WAS QUIET…
She sat alone on the chair,
Letting it down was her hair,
She was present in front of the eyes,
But truly was she there?
The lady who was always lustering bright,
Today why the mother was quiet?
Tumbled over the thought that something was not right,
What was troubling mother from day until night?
Has something gone wrong,
Or did she listen to someone’s sad song.
Lost in her thoughts, she looked at the sight,
Why the mother was quiet?
Couldn’t control the curious mind,
What happened wrong couldn’t find.
Suddenly the eyes grew wide,
There was something to confide.
Not good in the deeds,
In a moment, the life felt like scattered in beads.
How couldn’t it be realized,
That life was not at all mesmerized.
The moment, got to know, there was a blunder,
Now there was nothing to wonder,
Went; stood near her,
Gave the warmest hug to the dear.
She looked at me; I looked at her,
She didn’t say a word, nor did I utter.
That moment sparked a light in life.
Now the secret unfolds,
That why the mother was quiet.
RIDA YUMN AHMED
Beautiful Rida and I’m a mother 🤗
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My..my..really?! Its an ode to all the lovely mothers out there and I believe your child is blessed to have a mother with great thoughts like you❤
May God give you and your family all the happiness💙
Mothers are a treasure and this one ..a poem written by a daughter is an #ode to all lovely m🌼ms..
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And its an honour. Thank you. It felt special. you too..a wonderful blessing to mommy. God bless. Wish you the same.
Mothers are God on Earth.
Lots of love and hugs
Jay:)
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And you know wot….
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I’m sulking now..😫😫😫😭😭😭😭 as u haven’t read my last post . On lighter note.hehe
Have a blessed day sweetheart,😘
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Hey….I knew it from the very beginning I pressed that submit button.😌I very well know that you want to go to moon with your son and I was amazed at that moment only…Your answers were truly good
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Hahaha…no prob.read my last two posts behna
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I like this!
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Thank you so much my lovely friend…Love you bruh❤❤
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The troubling mother. Is there any other kind?
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Very nice
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Loads of love❤Thanks
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The poem gives an insight to your mind. All children love their mothers. But is it unconditional? Mothers love is always and will forever be unconditional. The love of mothers sometimes do not permit them to speak.
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Thank you sir❤
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Loads of love❤❤ Amazing
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This is so breath taking and sweet! As a mom I know how a warm hug from my kids can really do the magic of encouraging me. It makes all the stress worth it.
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You made my day Ma’am… Loads of love and may God bless you and your family.. Your family is blessed to have a super mom like you because you have Amazing thoughts❤❤
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This was beautiful 💙
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Thanks a ton Aakriti di…But surely not better than yours❤
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Nooo nooo , nothing like that
You write even better
Really don’t worry about who is writing better bcoz each writing is a different work altogether ,different with different emotions and each is beautiful in itself ❤️💙
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I know every genre has its essence….but with experience comes betterment…and you certainly have it more than me😘
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💙
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Are you in school or are you in college ? 🙂
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Wow very nice, Keep posting such Fantastic Posts…:-):-):-)
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Awww…that was a lovely comment…God bless you❤
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You are welcome…:-)
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Keep in touch…:-)
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awesome post
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Thanks my dearest Rahul…Loads of love❤
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Great… Sweet one
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So sweet! Love it
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Thanks my love..Its my privilege you liked it
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Lovely
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It is so sweet ❤
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this is woven with threads of love n passion u adore for ur mother which is beautifully chisseled in this poem…really it is commendable😍😍😘😘
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Love you dear❤❤Your compliment is always awaited😘Thanks bruh
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It reminds me of my mom.I am going to call her when I reach home🤗
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Beatiful Rida and l’m a mother
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You have made my day dear…
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Adorable ❤
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Love it dear…You are lovely
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❤❤
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Hats off dear
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Don’t have words… lovely
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Very sweet..God bless
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Lovely
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Reblogged this on Inside My Mind and commented:
Beautiful written
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Aww…thank you so much Ma’am… You made my day❤Loads of love…Stay blessed
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Beautiful!
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Nice.. ❤❤❤👌
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You rocked it dear❤
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This is so sweet!
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Glad the sweetness reached you❤
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Lol, me too
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Such a beautiful piece
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Thanks a ton my dearest.. Loads of love❤
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❤❤
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Awesome!!👏👏
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Thank you for the lovely feedback❤Happy new year❤
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Happy new year to you too 😊😊!! And I have written a poem on the same topic : “Mothers” !! Do give it a read 😊 hope u like it
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I just read that…Whoahh….we both share super love…for a mother from their child…Hope we have a lasting bond….Loads of love❤
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Hehe!! That’s so true!!😍 Yayyy!!!😊😍
And I hope for the same.. cheers!!😊
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I just got a friend…Hee…Hee…❤❤I wish to read more from you❤
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Same pinch!!!😉😉 Cheers to this new friendship!😊😊☺️☺️
Definitely yaar! Will write more.. and hope u will continue as well ☺️
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Thanks for the support and love..darl❤
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My pleasure 😊
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This is beautiful and I’m also a mother of teenage kids 😊
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Aww….so sweet….may god bless you and yours…mothers are always the best❤
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God bless you also 😊❤️
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Beautiful! ❤❤
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Thanks a ton darl❤
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Yes, sometimes mothers need some peace and quiet to restore themselves and a hug ! Am now a grandmother too and sitting quietly with the sleeping baby so her Mum can relax a bit!
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Aww….moms are always lovely… Your words are full of warmth…Your family is blessed to have you❤
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Oh my goodness this was beautiful
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Thanks my honey bunny❤Happy to have you here
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Beautifull poem rida….it really hurts when mom is upset
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It’s the worst experience.. I believe 😭
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